All Comments on 'The Beginning'

This is a nice beginning. waiting for more

Aakash

Waiting for this to progress. looking forward to the next episodes.

A budding new writer: a woman, a girl friend, a lover, a huntress, a swinger, a nymph...long way to go baby..enjoy the cocks and cunts

Eddie

Bad practice and bad start!

Excellent build up to a great story. Wish you never would stop. Please give a little more details to the look and attire of the main protagonist, like high heels, anklets on one ankle,low waist sari with backless blouse on one occasion....make her a true slut as she is....go on and on with your wonderful narration. Given 5 stars to all stories. I am hooked on to your writing. Don't make us wait a lot on every installments though.