This is a great start to what should be a terrific fantasy series. Excellent characters and setting, with great writing and a fine storyline, embellished with a wonderful love scene. Five stars.
Just a simple erotic author who writes just about whatever pops into my head. Most of what I write I shred up and toss away but this is the first time I've decided to let the public read them. I want to become a better writer so please give me any tips, criticism, suggestions,...