All Comments on 'The Belly Button Ring'

by Otazel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

That was a lovely story. Very sexy and very sweet. Thank you. :)

silveraidersilveraiderover 3 years ago
Pure Otazel

Well written. A novel situation for the protagonists, which is always welcome, plus two well written characters (just enough detail to visualise each of them) with genuine affection between them. Yes it echoes earlier stories, like Caitlyn and While Wet from the Shower, but a good story is always a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very erotic indeed

Great story.

amoroneamoroneover 3 years ago

Fabulous syory, so well written and very erotic. Thank you for that insight into pleasuring a woman.

DesireDollDesireDollalmost 3 years ago

Love the build up, the unexpectedness!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very good build-up!!

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