by sunburycd
one of the best writers on this site - you already are!!! 5 stars. fun, sexy story. love the tease.
Great story for a quick read. Even if it was short it was very enjoyable and good enough to get this old man hard lol.
Keep writing! You're really one of the best writing around here these days!
Keep being descriptive, voyeuristic, etc.
The only disappointment was not cumming in her pussy where cum belongs. Any where else is a turn off for me. Blow job? MEH! Anal, oh hell no I'm not gay like the wimps of today. Love the hairy pussy, I don't care for the little kid look.
The story got really hot near end,
they have more self defense classes.
why not more chapters, and we can't
forget MANDY. Not a bad read, well done.
...THANKS...
Good story and if love to see more of Mandy. I'd also like to see the use of an editor to correct some misused words and grammar.
This was incredible, but a little rushed. And a threesome between these two and Manndy would be incredible!