by thrillerauthor
beautiful story and i love the happy ending although it isnt really the ending is it ,would love to read more ,write again soon please .
Thank you for a very enjoyable story - well-drawn and likeable characters, and a feel-good conclusion. Nicely done!
Great story structure, real characters, good grammar... This is the type of story not oft seen on sites like this. Keep going!
HE SOUND SO HOT I WOULD LOVE TO MEET A STUD LIKE THAT
Oh My , I have so loved every word you have written for us all to enjoy . Thank you kindly for sharing your craft and skill , so we might indulge just a little as we read the tale you have woven . xxxx
Hugs
Kathryn. x