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All Comments on 'The Best Mistake'

by Ivan_Ho

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PeperePepereabout 9 years ago
Great start

Very good for your first effort. Keep writing.

burningloveburningloveabout 9 years ago
Very good 1st Story!!

Refine the dialog and you'll do well! Good plot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice work

I like stories like these. It didn't become tacky by having the friend join in or anything, just a nice story. Dialogue could be a bit better, but not bad

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