All Comments on 'The Bet'

He teases her all day, denying her, tormenting her and building her to a fever pitch - all of which is very nicely described, and then it wraps up in a paragraph. It's like you got bored or ran out of time. This would be a fantastic story if you gave the same attention to the climax as you did the foreplay.

You did a wnderfujob..Keeps you interested wanting more...Makes me quite horny..The shower scenes remind me of your sexy shower pics.. can imagine your ass being that red...I really enjoyed it...Keep on writing Sweetie..You are very talented

yikes... I'd have to know that all that pain was helping...