All Comments on 'The Bet and the Payoff'

by Jill_P

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
humm

O.Kaayyy. . .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Huh

Have you considered therapy?

Clearly your knowledge of female anatomy is poor, anything going through the cervix is going to cause extreme pain. Any husband who would force this on his wife needs a few kicks to the balls and divorce papers.

If you want to fuck around no worries just do it but your fantasy comes across as disturbing at best at least to me.

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
just a story people

let it go, just a story lol

superdutyfansuperdutyfanalmost 5 years ago
Great story

I enjoyed your story very much. Don't listen to the haters it's all a fantasy and it waz 5 stars for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Uhmm

It was great until the cervix part. Just no dude lol

lbentonlbentonover 4 years ago
nice twist

great twist at the end. loved the story, great righting and keep it up

thank you

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