All Comments on 'The Betelgeuse Rules'

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timeridertimeriderabout 2 months ago

Well done, look forward for more adventures.

DarrenwhipstheslutsDarrenwhipstheslutsabout 2 months ago

Loving these continuations of the 34 Universe. Keep them coming. !

Widya31Widya31about 2 months ago

I just follow your story, this is cool. Keep up more good work!

Joe_Doe_StoriesJoe_Doe_Storiesabout 2 months ago

I was quite intrigued by the idea of rich alpha girls going to the slave market to see their male classmates naked and graded. If they end up back-in-school, it must give the girls a delicious sense of power to see them in class again, attempting to look intellectual and in charge, now that she's seen him jerking off with a row of other male slaves as the whip cracked his ass.

Of course, there's always the chance that the rich girl might somehow arrange to have a loan called and purchase any male that has displeased her in some way. A quick trip to the slave vet would allow her to 'fix' any disputes between them, a threat she would be sure to make during his slave inspection when he was forced to stand naked before her and her squad of friends.

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