All Comments on 'The Big Get Even'

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gnfgnfabout 20 years ago
I know that

some will call her a slut, and want to see her either be pregnant or catch some horrible std. I see this as a classic case of getting even.

If she is as beautiful and described and her husband is plowing a cow with big tits at some bar then he deserves whatever he gets in return.

Great story keep up the good work.

George

dsidedsidealmost 20 years ago
Bad

Did the slut ever hear of divorce. Now she is no better than her husband.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
What a bastard boss.

He takes advantage of her vulnerability. Nevertheless, if it was only that, I would have rated the story 100. However, his deceit in removing the condom, after she insisted on one, is unforgivable. Even though it turned out otherwise, that lack of consideration could be cruel. I don’t like stories where people are mistreated and the evil ones go unpunished. Therefore, the story is only worth 50.

If the story had of continued and she had filed sexual harassment charges against him and collected money and he was fired than the story would have had justice and still would have rated 100.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
My name: Mark

My side of the story is... The condoms - it wasn't mine. I saw that sick bastad at the club and i swear he planted it. We had a b&e and nothing was missing. I never was unfaithfull to Jacqui, I'll be the biggest Idiot if I f#ckd around. The hair is quite explainable, It was rainy the night of the burgulary and my little sis didn't have something warm to wear in the rain - she has long blonde hair. And finally that blonde bimbo - my half sister (on my father's side) gets easily scared by men who just want to drag her to bed. We went for a drink on three - yes exactly three - occasions and she made belief we are lovers to prevent people from harrasing her.

That is my side. Make of it what you wish!

Simple49erSimple49eralmost 15 years ago
I thnk he is having an affair:

I realize that line is the set up for a sex description that is supposed to be titilating and sexy. But the problem is she "thinks" he is cheating and her proof is some condoms and suspicion: not confirmation. So let's admitt it was just her excuse to do what she wanted to do and she did it for herself, not to save her marriage. Two wrongs etc. Of course she has not confronted him: that would ruin the chance to cheat and not make it as much fun to do. Just another spouse who wants the security of marriage, but also thinks she deserves a little on the side. Does she love her husband? Nah! He is just a convenience for her. Why rock the boat when she can have the best of both worlds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yikes some boss.

She's no better than her husband. Two wrongs don't make a right.

chytownchytownalmost 12 years ago
Funny Story

Thanks for sharing.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Crap

Revenge fucks never work.

I HATE CHEATERS

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very hot

Enjoyed it, well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Stilted, difficult to read !

If you can't use the language, then don't ! 1* !

SampkyangSampkyangover 8 years ago
TOO FUNNY

everyone in this story is a skank slut especially the little boys!

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
USEE OR USER

bottom line still a score. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not Aware of What the Sexual Harassment Laws Were in S.A. in 2003, but . . .

A male supervisor balling his female subordinate, was then and is now a recipe for disaster for the male in the USA in 2003 and 2016. Perhaps it's not in South Africa.

Doing it when she was in acute emotional distress is likely to make the boss/secretary relationship much less tenable.

And slipping offf the condom makes the protaganist essentially a miserable son of a bitch, although, since she did let him slide it in at first without a condom, STD and sperm transmission could have occurred during that initial entry, so maybe he's a little bit less of an sob.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
All the condom does?

Is encourage her husband to file for a divorce with a clear conscience knowing his wife is a cheating slut. Talk about a bad idea! I'll never understand how a woman would think that cheating to get even is NEVER a good plan. All it does is make her a whore. Badly thought out drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
re: My Name Is Mark

My female cousin and I pretended to be lovers when we went to a restaurant to eat when she and her mother came to her grandfather's (my uncle's) funeral. We did it to keep men from hitting on her. When I had to report back to my military unit, she gave me a picture of her in a pink two-piece bathing suit. I taped it on inside of my locker, but someone stole it.

So I can believe your version. In fact, you have the makings of a good story.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Great revenge

My husband is an assholes so I'll just become a whore. That'll show him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not cheating

I walked in on my wife Ellian's and het boss Tony talking in his office. They didn't know I was there apparently. I really didn't care for Tony he always gave me the impression he was better than I really everyone. As I listened I was learning more about the lieing snake. He was trying to convince Ellian I was cheating on her telling her he had seen me with another woman ect. She was starting to break down crying and when he hugged her and kissed her I stepped in grabbed Tony by the hair jerked him away from Ellian and hit him in the stomach as hard as I could making him bend forward and cough then vomit. I asked Ellian if she was ok? She just looked at me. That pissed me off and I let loose. You mean to tell me you believe this womanizer lieing two face and not your husband? I turned to Tony he had a smirk on his face and I wiped it off by b____ slapping him and told him to tell the truth or I would beat it out of him. He admitted he was lieing. I said thank you for telling the truth for once maby you should practice it more often it may not hurt you so much. I turned to leave and Ellian said wait. I asked why? She said I don't want to be alone with Tony give me a couple minutes to gather my belongings. She told him she quit and we left. She apologizing to me for falling for his lies

I said let's just be more careful in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Short and sweet. A clever and entertaining little tale.

LA

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thought the story was really hot... up until the sexual assault. Taking off a condom without telling the other person isn't hot. Luckily for the story, she was 'into' the rape. Otherwise, she could sue his balls off. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Non-consensual_condom_removal

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just what he needs to file for a divorce!

Anonymous
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