by suzi86
The story is shaping up very nicely although I would like to see your chapters a little longer. The style is somewhat like the erotica of the late-Victorian period and is certainly well written. I'm pleased to see that the starting rating for this chapter is so much better than the previous one (which deserved a far higher rating for the quality of your writing alone). An enjoyable romp!
Very good follow up to Part 1. I know I am going to thoroughly enjoy reading about Sophie and her new life.
I can’t wait for more chapters of this story! I hope there’s a lot! I look forward to reading them! I hope the chapters are longer, too. Keep up the great work!
You Gotta Be Kidding!?! 😞
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Hallo Suzi!
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Well now what's this, "To be continued ?" Somehow we really doubt that!... But we'd love to have you prove us wrong,,, yes!
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Thank-You, we were really enjoying the story!... 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms!... Yummy!
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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼!
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