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by JohnJAverage

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh why did you leave so early....

You could have ended up absolutely covered in cum.....

lexitlimeylexitlimeyover 14 years ago
Great Maiden Voyage Story

Very good, very well written, love the progression from being unaware of being looked over, to being used, and to then later masturbating.

BiskitBiskitover 14 years ago
Been there, done that!

You had me hard remembering being that guy. First time and a life time of great memories. The next step for you is to add dialog. Every good porn story has it. Try it, you'll like it. Thanks for getting me off.

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