All Comments on 'The Big Time Pt. 01'

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Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaover 19 years ago
Excellent!

Where can I get a dog like that! This story was a lot of fun and pretty damn sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What? No upside down kiss?

J/K! Very fun submission. Flows well, comedy elements work well. Would very much like to see the story continued.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
One of the best

Loved this story, really hot, and honestly the first erotic story i've read that had me laughing. Your a brilliant writer and i can't wait to keep reading your stuff

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