All Comments on 'The Big Time Pt. 01'

by WhisperStory

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
One of the best

Loved this story, really hot, and honestly the first erotic story i've read that had me laughing. Your a brilliant writer and i can't wait to keep reading your stuff

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
What? No upside down kiss?

J/K! Very fun submission. Flows well, comedy elements work well. Would very much like to see the story continued.

Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaover 19 years ago
Excellent!

Where can I get a dog like that! This story was a lot of fun and pretty damn sexy!

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