by bluedragonauthor
If anyone wants to read ahead, my rough drafts of the complete story through Chapter 58 are available on my Patreon page: BlueDragonAuthor (one word, no spaces)
Given how this is supposed to be set in the late 90’s or 2000 given the technology mentioned and other things, Daylight Savings Time started in April and the game of cornhole was not yet called that.
Realistically speaking, are there actually any 18 year old high school senior girls who have a tattoo located in the same intimate area as Holly does? I guess that it's possible, but I highly doubt it. And if said girl had her parents consent for it, I'd say that they're horrible people.
There's a fine line that most people today just don't understand. I'm quite sure that a huge number of people reading this comment just don't get it either. When you are a truly GOOD person who cares deeply about individual freedom and society as a whole, then you will understand why it's important. Good moral values are important. Kids in high school sporting tattoos on any part of their body isn't a good thing. If you don't get it, I pity you.
It was a clever move to bring the Holly character back into the story. Not likely to happen but it would be smart if Holly winds up being the one to show BTC that Matt doesn't have to choose 1 girlfriend to stay with forever and that they can all have there relationships with him ongoing.
Scottish Texan: are you in your 60’s or something? Also, you’re against tattoos for 18 year olds but you’re down for 18 year olds having daily anal orgies? Or is it just that you don’t like women making choices for themselves?
Good moral values. Gtfoh.
Everyone help!! My heart tattoo is gonna make me molest the parishioners!
These “kids” you speak of are legally adults. Old enough to die for good ol’ ‘Merica. So if they want a double ended dildo shoved up their mom and dads asses tatted on their thigh that’s their business.
Hey Bluedragon nice chapter! Thought I’d throw that in given that’s what the comment section is actually for. Good on ya for the random pullback of Holly that was a great change of pace
We are gettign close to the final part of the story, with 42 out of 58 chapters now published. There will be more drama, more sex, but most of all i wonder how the writer will wrap up the story. It's been a long ride and I would love to read an epilogue that is a few years later to see how all the characters ended up.
For those who post anonymously, like this twit:
Anonymous3 days ago
Scottish Texan: are you in your 60’s .....
YOUR OPINION MEANS ABSOLUTELY NOTHING BECAUSE YOU'RE TOO SCARED TO BACK IT UP WITH YOUR OWN NAME.
It at times annoys the lack of consistency in characters. They oscillate between the poise of someone who is 60 with unending wisdom and absolute infancy. Also in response to another commenter. Tattoos is a weird hangup in a harem fiction story with orgies. I think you're right. But its like complaining to the pimp you just bought a hooker from about how society has decayed. Well you're in the process of corrupting the social fabric. (As am I.) We're really not in a place to point fingers.
"ScottishTexan" wants people in an online porn comments section to stop hiding in anonymity, and I for one agree. Signed, Otis P Driftwood.
(But please let us all argue more on the internet. That's just what the world needs.)
I am enjoying the story, but had a question/comment..
They seem very mature for H.S., but haven't even floated the idea that there could be more than 2 people in a long term committed relationship.. especially with the girls being almost all bisexual, it just makes sense...
OOOHHH...ScottishTexan....you SURPRISE ME ever so much...YES, high school girls DO have tattoos in those places...parents today "do not care" because the parents have the tattoos. Now, this is not judgment, just statement of fact. (BTW-One of the favorites is to tattoo a mouse/rat on the inside thigh, so the 'pussy' has something to eat!! LMAO!!!!)
I am very ☺ happy to see "Hollister" (Holly) back in the 📷 picture...I know, I know...this is fantasy, after all, and a 'harem' story...so y'all get over yourselves about Matt & his BTC...
Spring Break at Santa Cruz Sounds like a wonderful 💡 idea...except NOT in today's environment!
Tally Ho, Y'all...and Five**5**Stars for the author!
@ScottishTexan Are we to believe that 'ScottishTexan' is your legal name? Because if it's not, than you're just as anonymous as the rest of us. Therefore, your opinion by your own reasoning means absoluteoy nothing. Congratulations. You played yourself.
As for what you actually said, 18 year olds are adults. Whatever they choose to do with their own bodies is their business. Not yours.
Yeah, bringing Holly back is just what was needed to kick the story back into high gear!
@ScottishTexan and a couple others who are fixated on chronologics , age , personal body art , what parents would or shouldn't do . Forget they are reading fiction . A fantastically written tale by an author with talent , brains and a sense of humor . And can write anything he fucking wants . Which is a hellovalot more than you whiners .
So STFU and enjoy !
I think it’s a credit to the authors writing talent to get comments like, “NO WAY WOULD HE DO THAT!!”. Evoking strong emotions from us readers who are invested in the characters isn’t easy to do.