by bluedragonauthor
This is the only erotica I have read that has got me in my feelings and I keep pondering upon it for weekdays until the next chapter..Plz don't stop this ever 😬😬 btw Team Sam all the way
Well, obviously, duh! Good direction.
Matty misreads himself as well as everything and everone else in sight. I mean, what do we expect from 18 year-olds?!
Way to go Matty!! Sincere, from the heart, emotion, Sam is the favorite and won the girlfriend tests. Great writing, very enjoyable series.
This is my shameless plug that if anyone wants to finish the complete story right away, it's available on my Patreon page: BlueDragonAuthor (one word, no spaces)
Wow!!! This part of the story really hit on the emotions. I've seen Matt's love for all the girls. I've loved how you described Matt's connections with each of the girls and how he truly loves each one in their own special ways. The way you developed Matt's love has been a progression of little intimacies from the beginning. The moment you showed his realization of his complete love for Sam without saying it was a masterpiece of writing. Thank for this gift. It's not often I see this quality of writing. I truly hope everything works out in this storyline. K
I loved the way you carbon copied the wake up scene every morning. It's like foreshadowing what some people picture marriage to be. Predictable and boring.
I myself never felt that way. I never found myself bored with my wife. I found security for a while. But being surrounded by family is extremely rewarding. It's only a pain to those people who are more in love with themselves than others. Unfortunately, there's plenty of narcissists to go around with no end to the leftovers. 5/5
I wish I didn’t have to wait a week to read the next one please don’t stop and keep them coming awesome story… Team Sam
Loved every part of it...... You know....... Why don't u put a picture of every women resemble each character? Then our imagination would be better. Don't u agree?
To the reader asking for photos, I do have photo galleries of the character suggestions on my Patreon and on Discord.
To the fellow who said that "the author was a manipulative wanker".
C'mon! If he wasn't you'd know what was going to happen and the fun of the story would be lessened.
Great story.
I agree with another reader's assessment, "this story is so damn good."
I've run out of superlative adjectives to describe your writing. There is no question, you are the best author, of the thousands that I've read. You describe emotions and feelings like no other. Thank you, thank you, thank you !!!
Oh, boy...Matt went and did EXACTLY what we have all been wanting to do...FINALLY expressing HIS love for one of them, in this instance, Sam...
AND, this is TRUE, what he is saying to Sam...his true, deep, ABIDING love for her...and she is gonna FREAK OUT about the exposure of Matt's true feelings!!
THIS IS THE REASON I LOVE THE SERIES...the EMOTIONS that are put into play, how people really become ATTACHED, that sex DEMANDS that we FEEL the other person, not just use them & then discard them.
This whole GROUP, including Holly (she cannot be just cast aside!) has this 💘 LOVE permeating all through them, and it cannot be denied!d
Good on Matt...and, on to the next Chapter!!
I’m glad Matt finally picks one of the girls instead of keeping the status quo, but I just really don’t feel the chemistry with Sam. Their interactions always look like forced cheesy romance to me, not something that feels real. Neevie, Belle or even Alice feel like so much better girlfriend prospects.
There’s nothing so naked as putting your heart at risk, gambling everything in hope of getting something great but fearing you’ll be crushed.