All Comments on 'The Big Tits Club Pt. 02 Ch. 05-06'

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alchemist1248alchemist124813 days ago

The alliteration must end

RonanJWilkersonRonanJWilkerson11 days ago

This story is great.

The alliteration is ... beginning to detract from the story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Yes the Alliteration must be dialed back, a sprinkle here or there is plenty.... Aside from that I am really enjoying a well written story, good characters & character development, plot and subplots.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next installments, the foreshadowing is an added pull for the reader continuing to stay invested ... well done

dirtywhiteboy67dirtywhiteboy678 days ago

A damn good start on the 2.0 edition of the BTC.

Thank you for returning with some of our favorite characters and adding new ones.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

So glad you are writing BTC 2.0 I've been looking forward to this for ages! Thanks

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