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furluvrcafurluvrcaabout 2 years ago

Okay, let me try this again. My original comment got posted before I had finished it. What I was starting to say is that your prose is just a tiny bit overdone. Too many idiosyncratic phrases, inconsistent capitalization, grammatical oddities, etc. Lots of language, but I'm left puzzled as to what actually happened.

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