All Comments on 'The Bimbo Pill Pt. 03 - Gwen'

and here i thought it couldn't get any better. wow, you out did yourself. thank you

Great story. I have enjoyed all 3 chapters and look forward to a 4th ? Keep the surprises coming for this fun loving family. How about adding some of Veronica’s co-workers and their families to the mix ?

Another 5 stars for the best Author on Literotica......

I could read the exploits of Ronnie, max, Linda and Gwen everyday lol. Ty

No, please NOT the end!! Searingly hot. 5 & fave.

Smoking hot, as usual. Thanks very much.

Hello, everyone. If you enjoyed this story and would like to OWN the entire series, do a search for "The Bimbo Pill." on Smashwords. Or simply hit up my website. Thanks for all the kind words so far!

I have a feeling there is a lot more coming . GR8 chapter .

Dr beulahthemick; Sorry, you can't stop here, we all need more of this story, every chapter was knicker wetting (if you wear them, that is) so pt4 and more, please, pretty please. 5 stars naturally.

wish was not the end.

Gwen's little sister needs to get a taste of the Bimbo Pill !

Awesome series. This is the perfect ending

Writing a three-part story that actually acknowledges the grammatical conventions of English—good!😎

Starting and finishing a multi-part series on this website—better!😁

Crafting a tale that is imaginative, engaging, and fun —best! 🥳

Quoting Treebeard from JRR Tolkien’s The Two Towers seamlessly—priceless!!!!🎊🎉🥇

Hell, yes, I’m a fantasy geek but a well-read geek 🤪

This chapter was much better than the other two, almost like someone else wrote it. Good job.

All three installments worked well but I personally like one and two better. Not a fan of a crazy person blaming others for their choices. Thanks for sharing this tale.

Loved it! So many possibilities. I see much more of this story can be developed. Please more!

5 cookies

G72,

Don’t know if you’re a guy or a gal, honestly don’t care. Dude, you have a seriously big set of brass ones to write a story where a female character chooses love over career. The loud wailing of feminists is beautiful music to the ears!

Loved the story! Only thing I can't figure, is why Veronica, with all her knowledge and background, never suggested trying a Half Dose of the pill to judge its effects which based on the effects of the Full Dose, could actually be more feasible to release as a public product.

I need a fourth chapter

This author does a nice job of having interesting plots and exciting scenes. I just really don't enjoy the orgy or hot wife stuff. It bothers me when the word "love" is used. Seems fake, the word used should be "lust". Also makes me think these orgy fokes have high risk for STD. When u think about it this rutting between past and present partners is where STDs come from. Well it is your fantasy land, so u be u.

Excellent story. Needs more chapters. Will they all stay together in the house, will they all get pregnant? Hope to see ore chapters soon.