All Comments on 'The Bird Who Fell from Her Cage'

This is a good concept and the author has potential. It does have quite a few grammatical and editorial issues, the most glaring being the use of future tenses.. but they don't make it unreadable. Hope to read more from this scribe.

It wasn't a bad read, as the comment before stated there are a few grammatical errors, as well as using a not-so-popular future tense, I understand what it was used for though, I'd suggest for a story that's talking about a story that happened in the past keep to present tense. Other than that, it had a good premise behind it. Could've been a little longer, could've been beefed up a bit and also could've expanded, either way, I think you'll be glad that you got another reader.