All Comments on 'The Birthday Adventure'

Bravo....very real story I could see myself there, looking at the birthday cake with this hot blond, Stephanie wrapped around it.

Love the graffic nature of the language you used. You also did a good job with grammar and syntax.

I saw that this is your 1st posting here at Literotica,

hope we'll see more stories from you soon!

nice story

This is a hot and short story.

hot story, love the graffic details very well structured and written

So does he get to make something that will remind him of birthdays to cum (or is that come)? Maybe Stephanie needs to join him and Terri in a continuously living 3-some?

WELL DONE! FANTASTIC JOB! LOOK FOR MORE IN THE FUTURE.

Very enjoyable! I got quite stiff reading it. However, there is one point. Spit does not usually suffice for anal lube. Believe me, I know at least one woman who complained that her ex used only spit, and that it hurt very badly. Anal is great, but use lube! Anyway, however, it was still a great story about threesome- very erotic!

WOW.... is this my next b-day gift.... and i thought the year i got my first double BJ was a great year! :)

love and kisses,

Hubby

I enjoyed the hell out of this story and will be checking out the rest of you stories.

BD

goddamn you bitch... that was the last story of yours that i hadn't read...

MORE! MORE!!!!!!!

i need to watch Lword... lol. or something...

you're such a hottie.

*HUGS*

j

What a way to blee the man you love. To Even think of taking him on this trip was a great adventure. Maybe in her bi-sexual way she wanted to also taste and fuck some strange pussy and this became a good excuse to make this happen.

Why don't those sickos commit sepuku??