All Comments on 'The Birthday Boy'

Well written, realistic, enjoyable and erotic story. The public humiliation of the husband at the restaurant and the involvement of his sister were both particularly enjoyable aspects.

Ok, it was very well written. I guess I’m just not into the total abandonment of self-respect, or respect of a character’s loved ones. My favorite stories are about tension and release. Build plot, introduce tension, solve problem, repeat until plot is exhausted. Never having a problem resolve, just continue to grow, makes a story difficult to read, or stay with. This story starts with the problem, which is ok, but then more and more of the same is heaped on Mike, and in the end the solution is just “ok, off to work I go.” Just my $.02, for all it’s worth!

Good story, well written but a bit long. I would have caged Mike earlier, but wife and sister as lovers us hot, them to add best friend and his big cock pushes over the edge. Would like to hear more. DW

Just a quick note to say that I appreciate the header and story description. This is definitely not my cup of tea when it comes to stories, so I appreciate the heads up. I didn't read it, I won't score it down and everyone walks away happy.

I am curious, however, why authors of stories such as these publish them in LW where their niche audience is so small as opposed to Fetish, where they might find a larger and more appreciated audience.

Fantastic story!!! Congratulations!

One of the best emotional cuckolding / humiliation stories I have ever read.

5***** ! Excellent humiliation and cuckold denial story. Would like to see you continue with another chapter or more, maybe you can have hubby cleanup his wife and sister after they have been fucked all night long. He can try to keep his wife and sister from getting pregnant by eating their cream pie pussies, of course that's not going to work!

Michael can change the babies diapers while his wife Lisa and sister Rebecca get pounder by Jon's big cock all night long. Please continue the humiliation of Michael in chapter 2.

Well, I knew about Lisa and Jon., but that part with the sister was out of left field. I have to run to work. So I have to come back to finish the story later, but I've already given it five starts (which I've never done before finishing a story). It's just that I can tell that I am enjoying the progression and emotion placed in the story. I can't wait to finish it.

Make another ch. Of this please 🙏

Loved your story! Took me some time to find it, but I'm sure glad I did. Full points! One of the best in this genre I've read for a long time … and I've read many :)