All Comments on 'The Birthday Dinner'

It came over as mechanical sounding. It did not feel like storytelling more recounting a fantasy. Perhaps a different pov and a lengthier telling would help.

Short and to the point. I have dreamed of getting this treatment for ever. It's never going to happen though. Good for you.

A nice fun story. Well done, enjoyed it.

Well done. I miss the days of decent hand jobs. Nice story.

However from reality point, It is his birthday and he gets hand job?!

I personally would be furious.

PS: you see... You didn't indicate about later events?