The Birthday Favour

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

"Come for me, Jack! Cum in me! Shoot that spunk into your sister!"

He was thrusting wildly, each stroke deeper than the last.

"Gonna cum..." he moaned

"Do it! Cum in me! I need it! Shoot your hot cum in my pussy!"

"Angie!" he groaned through clenched teeth.

"Oh... God... Fuck... Yes... Ohh..." I was moaning. "Oh fuck... fuck, I'm cumming... fuck... yes.. YES... " I gasped out, barely aware what I was saying as the biggest orgasm in my life hit me, washing through my body.

My cunt was clenching and spasming and almost, as if from somewhere else, I felt Jack's length pounding me deeper and deeper until finally he came. I felt his cock swell and heard him groan. His cock jerked and throbbed as he came so hard into me, spurt after spurt of his hot cum shooting deep inside me. My cunt squeezed and grasped that wonderful cock of his as it pulsed, jet after jet of his boiling hot seed spraying my greedy pussy.

I was moaning and gasping words, incoherent, as I came. His name, curses, wordless animal noises.

I felt colours, energy, wave after wave of orgasm flooding through me and the heat of his cum turned my whole body molten.

* * *

Later. Once the sweat had dried on our bodies and we'd recovered from the experience we'd just shared. Recovered physically, at least.

I pulled on my blouse.

"This was just the once, Jack. Just because it was your birthday. We're never going to do it again. And nobody else must ever ever know. It's our secret, OK?"

"OK."

As I put on my skirt, I asked him. "Did you really steal my panties?"

"No. Of course not. You're my sister."

I laughed. I picked up my little cotton underwear from the floor where I'd dropped them. I took a quick sniff. Yes, I'd been very wet when I was wearing them, and they smelled very strongly of me. Of my arousal.

I threw them at Jack.

"Here. A real birthday present. If you ever want to remember today."

"Oh. I'll never forget it."

"Good, because it won't happen again."

I slipped across the hall into my room. As I took off my clothes and put on the oversized T-shirt I slept in, I realised that I'd been lying to Jack. We might just do it again. After all, there was so much we hadn't done. He hadn't licked me out. We hadn't 69-ed. He hadn't cum on my face, or on my tits. Hell, we hadn't even kissed. Not properly. I wondered if my brother was a good kisser, what his tongue would feel like in my mouth. Or in my pussy.

He had a birthday every year. My birthday was only a few months away. And didn't people give each other presents sometimes just because they felt like it? "I saw this and I thought of you?" After what we'd just done, I'd be thinking about my older brother quite a bit.

He'd mentioned Holly hadn't he? Maybe for his 21st birthday, I could set up a threesome with her and the two of us. Or maybe he could set one up with one of the guys from uni. One who didn't know that I was his sister.

I slipped into my bed, pulled the covers over me and drifted off into a satisfied sleep. Thinking about my brother and all the other nasty things we could get up to.

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
21 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the way the sister was driving the train. Brother was obviously a willing participant. It came as a bit of a surprise that sister had fucked twice before and, having done that, wasn’t on the pill already. So many young women already are to “regulate their periods” and have been since the middle 1960’s. All in, a very tender, if not completely moral relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Believable?

Too phony. A kid sister is to want sexual contact with her older brother so much that all reality under extreme conditions cease to exist? Two pages was more than I could handle. The older brother is basically allowing the baby sister to dictate the terms? Get real.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sensual and Believable!

This has been really good reading because of its sensuality and believability. The only suggestion is that there should be or should have been more tenderness and romanticism included to show their love for one another that was the original premise and that there would definitely be more love making between the two of them to reinforce that love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More favours, please!

Let them be lovers and no pills! She needs to get pregnant for her brother, that will be ultimate love for them.I wish i could do my big sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So what

The height sounds right to me I mean there human beings and if you're thirteen why are you on this site

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I am 5 foot 9 and I am 13 so you might want to change the height of the brother and sister

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sibling Incest

18% of College girls admit to having sex with a sibling, so 20% of women have had sex with a brother or sibling. Incest is much more common then we pretend.

This was a sexy story, wonderful gift!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
"..bad idea to start a story with 'it'" ???

What about a Tale of Two Cities? D:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot and sexy

Hot story. Reminded me of my sister in school uniform. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A pretty good read

Not exactly my preferred reading material, but still a good read.

From what I have been told, it's a bad thing to start out a story with "It."

@Mello_SixtyNine hello! I use nouns to address my cousins, and sibs all the time. Welcome to my world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Sibling love

Jack will be back for me, believe it! And Angie is so aware of how turned on she can get -- she'll be giving him coupons right and left!

How about some attractive chest hair for Jack? He seems old enough to sport some hair on that manly and muscular chest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot story

Bros and Sis can help each other out without going all the way. It can be beneficial to both in many ways.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
@ Anon. "Needs serious editing"

Favour is spelled with a 'u' in the UK, as is 'colour' and most other similar words. This author uses English spellings because that is where he comes from. US English and UK English spellings vary quite a lot at times, but as the author is English his use of English spelling is correct. Please check the profile next time before sounding off. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
needs serious editing

The story needs an editor seriously as numerous mistakes and bad spelling are present. The spelling errors begin with the title as the proper way is "favor" NO 'u' in it and others can be found.

Mello_SixtyNineMello_SixtyNineabout 10 years ago
Good Story!

If I had one criticism, it would be that it's unnecessary to use "brother" or "little sister" in such a direct way. I don't think that I have ever heard anyone refer to their sibling like that in the real world. An example of this:

(You wrote)

"Stick that dick in me, brother. Fuck me with your big, hard cock."

(My suggestion)

"Fuck me with your big, hard cock!" Angie breathlessly ordered her brother.

This way, you can refer to the sibling incest without telegraphing it for the readers. I understand that you probably wrote it that way to drive the point across of the perverse incestuous scenario, but it makes those portions of the dialog seem forced and unnatural. This is just my opinion so it's totally up to you to accept or ignore the advice.

4 stars.

Show More
Share this Story

Similar Stories

After School with Sister An ordinary school day takes a weird turn.in Incest/Taboo
Words on Skin A little sister can't say some things out loud.in Incest/Taboo
Accidents Happen! A brother and sister make a discovery.in Incest/Taboo
The Sleepover Brother interrupts sister's sleepover, lingerie party.in Incest/Taboo
Sister Sucks Sleeping Sibling He gets to know his sexy sisters.in Incest/Taboo
More Stories