All Comments on 'The Birthday Gift'

who has absolutly no knowledge of females and/or the realities of the female anatomy ad sexuality.

Supurbly written! Agonizing detail without losing forward momentum. You have talent! Thank you.

Wonderful descriptions and I loved the scenario. I don't know what that first commentator was thinking when he wrote his moronic comment. You may be a male or a female but one thing is for sure you know how to write erotica.

very sexy, very well written. And as a female, I enjoyed it.

I've met a number of women who have had fantasies of having two men at once. Now it may not be every woman's fantasy but it is for some. This is in many ways is probably like men who often fantasize about having two women whether it is realistic or not. I think in many cases for women this is a more realistic fantasy given the right guys and circumstances. Then again I'd always be up for it with two women if the opportunity ever presented itself not because I'm any better lover than anyone else but because it would be a very sexually stimulating thing to do with two lovers. I think it is great if a woman enjoys having two men this way too.

"Filling her with thick seed"...? You design well, but without a heart at the center. Go fuck a real man and not a blow up replica of daddy, then write like you know what dick is, fatso.

I think smotp can ignore the negative morons who hide safely behind 'anonymous' and struggle to put together a proper sentence in English. In erotica terms, I consider this quality writing - nicely paced, well composed and arousing too! I shall be picking my way through your other work, smotp, for sure.

Well done, and keep it coming!

The Tall Man

This was my fantasy that I couldn't put into words.

i find it amusing that in the world we live in today, people can still be so small minded as to make comments about people's fantasies, calling them uneducated and whatnot. this, minus the audience, is something that i often fantasize about... hands treating you as a greek goddess? gentle carresses from every direction.. being filled to the max in both sides.... this would be a dream come true for many women. as for the thick seed comment... seed is supposed to b thick.

this was very well written, i would love to experience more like it.

well written, elegant, and sexy. would love to read more like this one.

As had been said before - this was of pretty high quality. God, I know that *I* would love to be worshipped like this. Obviously I always come to the wrong places :D

Fantastic. That's some birthday present. A seriously hot story.

Sir,

I have always loved this story you wrote.

Thank you.

JRS {ooo's / xxx's}

I enjoyed this story when you first posted it. And I enjoyed re-reading it tonight.

I wish you wrote more stories but I understand your heart is into DEV which is Hot too. I love hearing your voice.

Curious Lady J