All Comments on 'The Birthday Party Ch. 02'
by sex4every1
- 9 Comments
HairAddict67over 5 years agoWasn't expecting a sequel but definitely wanted one! So glad that you wrote this! Very well done and the perfect followup!
Anonymousover 5 years agoMaking the son into a cuckold and a cumeater, I am out. You had a good story and then ruined it.
vikster89over 5 years agoUp until the cuckolding at the end it was absolutely hot and steamy. Such degenerate filth that all us fans are used to seeing. But that ending... damn. It sort of ruined it for me. Please keep the cuckolding of guys to a minimum if you can. Fans of yours are used to a specific type of fantasy and switching it like this will leave a sour taste. Still a big fan of your work and hope to see more of your stories!
Just_a_Gentover 5 years agoI do have to agree with everyone else at the moment. I'm not liking the cuck aspect. However, you're a fantastic writer. I love your casual slut stories. Thank you so much for a fun sequal!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoLoved the story development, also the ending.
Now that the dynamics have changed, can you have the mom becoming more controlling and using Andy for her own pleasure. That would be hot too :)
Anonymousabout 3 years agosex4every1 - please ignore the users who criticized the cruel gf/mom twist towards the end. it was awesome! please write more! all of your stuff is great and this is an awesome addition to your body of work!
Anonymousover 1 year agoSomewhat less of the loving, cool, slutty Mom in this chapter, and I wonder if Andy is ACTUALLY happy, and if slutty Mom really wants to withhold long-term...
GF has got to go, tho....
Less of a cool birthday present if it leads to this, perhaps...
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