All Comments on 'The Black Dress Chronicle Pt. 01'

Title says it all.

Great idea, Terrible english ruined it.

@oldmsufan Well, as mentioned on my story, take it or leave it. In your case, I guess its the later. So, why even bother? Thanks.

@Anonymous - Thanks for your thoughts on the "idea", truly appreciated. On the "grammer" matter (actually to be spelt... grammar, as Grammer is a noun), well, your point is well taken. Being a non-English speaking person, I will definitively try my best to improve! thanks xxx

So her husband couldn’t just have said you’re over reacting my secretary is gay? Licking a dirty arse and pussy? TWO pool cues in each hole? How is any of that supposed to be erotic? He seems happy to have a trophy slut wife and that’s not an issue it’s a D/s relationship this scenario is completely devoid of the safe and sane aspects that should be present. Does he care about her because she seems to be completely objectified as a fuck toy?

It’s not sexy it’s abuse it’s very wordy as though you’re trying too hard but it would benefit from a proof reader.

I found this story well written and descriptive and a pleasure to read. The Slut Wife in My opinion got what she deserved for making assumptions instead of being observant and asking questions about motives and desires of the secretary. I look forward to reading more from this writer.