All Comments on 'The Black Flutter'

The way you developed such a dark idea and at the same time made it so beautiful left me crazy, I liked your work, I would like to read more, maybe a second part?. the ending gave me goosebumps

Don't worry about the person saying it needed work. I love it! The premise was pretty awesome - I loved the twist of her killing him. But what were the black things? Yes, it needed to be longer, but I like your style.

could use some work.

hey could you make a part 2 to this or remake it but make it longer