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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Did you waste any time Proof Reading??

Example - " It got to appoint that I had to seek help ..."

'a point' NOT 'appoint'!

wcl1652wcl1652almost 3 years ago

The grammatical and spelling errors, although quite numerous, aren't half as bad as your ridiculous story line. Please, save yourself some time and refrain from any other submissions of stories!!!

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

*What wcl1652 said! damn that was bad. Sorry

beastboy42beastboy42almost 3 years ago

you people are horrible, and you are clearly looking for male centric stories vs female.

The words read like poetry and sing to the pleasure a woman can enjoy and not just to the experiences of men.

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