All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 14'

YES, YES, YES, AutumnWriter - Suddenly we find that there are some honest people prepared to help James and get at the truth! Peggy and her boss, with the help of the soft hearted but misused Tracey, are finding out just what a 'piece of shit' Jarrod is. It is time to cut his balls off! While the scheming of Nathan and Bob Jackson is getting them deeper into the shit, the deluded Reverend Ethan seems to have been demoted, thanks to Jarrod, to a misguided minor character. I am saddened that Abby has become such a scheming bitch in the best 'woman scorned' tradition. AutumnWriter, Chapter 14 was, indeed, the 'silver lining' to the 'storm clouds' you gave us in Chapter 13. A great series, Pete.

I hope O`toole is cleared and jarrod gets his dessert and locked up to O`toole deserves vengeance to be served justly and swift

Atlanta,Ga

One thing that does not ring true to me is the

apparent lack of sexual knowledge on the part of

the newly freed Father Jamie. I would think that

he had to deal with all the details in the confessional

for over 18 years. He would have had to make sensible

observations to both sexes. Other than that the

story is great. ( One detail is that after getting in

Norma's bed one should check for STD before moving on!)

When Father Jamie starts this story he

sounds awfully ignorant about sexual matters.

I should have expected that his years in the

confessional would have given him a complete education.

After spending time between Norma's legs I would

a suggest a quick visit to a doctor and a check for

STD.

Basically the story is great!

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