All Comments on 'The Blue Fountain'

Superb story, very well written!

Thank you

L

Excellent story. Very poetic

Giant info dump on page 1 makes it tedious to get through (and your character breaking the third wall to insult any potential readers is tacky). Nonetheless it's not the worst thing I've read.

That I would have loved to explore more. Thank you for sharing this with us.

but when she states she is not a lesbian, however has no interest in male friends or anything else to do with men, and only talks to woman then that does make her a lesbian, she can say she is not all she wants, but action speaks louder than words well in my opinion it does