All Comments on 'The Blue Fountain'

but when she states she is not a lesbian, however has no interest in male friends or anything else to do with men, and only talks to woman then that does make her a lesbian, she can say she is not all she wants, but action speaks louder than words well in my opinion it does

That I would have loved to explore more. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Giant info dump on page 1 makes it tedious to get through (and your character breaking the third wall to insult any potential readers is tacky). Nonetheless it's not the worst thing I've read.

Excellent story. Very poetic

Superb story, very well written!

Thank you

L