All Comments on 'The Blue Life Ch. 21: Fucking Red'

Good to see you pick the series back up. I hope you have more chapters coming since there are so many subplots left for you to explore.

I have this story plotted for at least another 10 chapters. And it's entirely open-ended right now. I don't have any set conclusion in mind yet.

I will probably be publishing through Chapter 25 by the end of the year. Maybe more. I've got through Chapter 24 written. But I'm polishing and proofreading those now.

I'm curious, which sub-plots interest you most? Because I'm always up for suggestions.

My personal kinks are BDSM and Pregnancy. The pregnancy thing probably is an extension of the Male Dom in me since I see giving a woman a child as an ultimate expression of making her mine. (My sub can't have any more kids, but she wishes she could give me 20).

So, based on those, I would love to see the Hierarchy firm up a bit with Daddy taking a bit more dominant role. I know you have given him a bit of a switch personality with mainly dominant characteristics, but a loving Dom still has to know the other side to make sure he has some idea of what his subs are going through. Dadddy also becoming more confident would be good. Maybe reintroduce Nick and use that to drive home Daddy's need to be the Head of the Family and get him to truly take up that mantle. In my experience, most subs need a Dom to be like the Captain of a Military Naval Vessel, confident, assured, quick to decide and then act on those decisions. I know that he is just in college, but he is old enough to truly develop into that, Besides, that twist would give Red a chance at some pay back and he definitely deserves it.

I'd also like to see him knock at least one of his subbies up. I know that they are being careful but, for instance, antibiotics can interfere with the effectiveness of chemical-based birth control and since after the STD testing they go without condoms, it gives the opportunity.

I would also like Sunny to be more dominant with his other subs. She a fascinating character in that she has considerably more experience in the world that the Family has really only played in with each other until now.

I know that these are more suggestions as to where I would take things as opposed to just a list of subplots and they also would require faster advancements of time in-story.

I've just read the whole series in 3 days and am hooked...surpringly as a story, not as masturbation fodder....well mostly as a story LOL

Keep the new chapters, and all the characters, CUMMING!!!

It's very encouraging to find that someone has enthusiastically read my story and is eager for more.

And yes, Fenixreign, Bobby will be impregnating several of his subs. But it might not be the ones you expect or in the ways you might expect that to happen.