All Comments on 'The Body Electric'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story! But who's Corinne?

Did you mean Tricia?

MudakMudakover 12 years agoAuthor
Corrected.

Tricia was the name of the character in an earlier version of the story. I just submitted an updated version of the story that corrects this error.

spankingfunforspankingfunforabout 12 years ago
Margaret rocks!

Margaret waited a long time to reuse her powers. I think I could not of stopped being in control! She has a treasure for a mind. I would have thought a lot bigger, like rich and powerful behind the world scene but the general idea of the story is fabulous! Great ideas!!

onebrownshoeonebrownshoealmost 10 years ago
Cold

It sounds like an X-Files episode

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