All Comments on 'The Body of Ella: Watching Sins'

It wasn't awful don't worry, I was just a bit disturbed by the Catholic references, I'm catholic, I went to a Catholic school and I know a fair bit about that sort of thing. The vagine is NOT called the sin hole and we are allowed to have sex, but it is preferred if it is AFTER marriage.

I thought the background of the innocent Catholic school added so much to the excitement. It is easy to imagine Ella growing up over the next few chapters and becoming a really big girl for her Aunt and Uncle.

Cant wait.

And that's saying something!

Please - PLEASE - don't ever submit anything else. Ever.

Your story is choppy. Ella starts out completely naive,and by the end she knows what a dick is, and what cum is, and a pussy. Since English isn't your first language, you really need an editor.