All Comments on 'The Bodyguard'

I rarely stay with a long story on this site, but you held me completely. Great job!

Loved it, as I have all you stories. Looking forward to more from you.

SB

Such an excellent read. Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful romantic love story! So well written! Thank you!

I love this story. Very well written and I didn't want it to end. Thank you for sharing this

I was not going to read this because it was too long for me, but I started reading it anyway, and made it to page 4 before I skipped to the ending. The build up was pretty good and I guess Sophie held out as long as she could, but in the end a happy ending for all

Wow.. Wow.. It is really good to read a story from start to end that is so gripping that you can not stop reading it. I have really enjoyed your script very much, good story line, excellent characters all in 6 pages that I wanted to go on and on. This is by far the best mini book I have read this year 01.10.19.Many thanks.

Loved this story! Will there be another chapter?

Please consider writing a second part to this amazing story I would love nothing more! Have read it 3 times already!!

I never wanted this story to end! I really hope there's like a part 2 or something! Hell if you published this book that would be awesome

I read to the very end hoping and praying for that love scene you’ve been building up to. great job but please don’t leave us hanging like this :(

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. This is a brilliant stuff.

But please continue this story with part 2 and show us a life together with Kayla and Sophie. This story just can't end here, there's so much potential. Please do consider!!

I cried my eyes out at the end. I just loved it! ❤️❤️❤️

Just finishing this during the quarantine lol. As usual, another great read from you. Hope to see some more material soon!

Thanks!

This story was really good. I love the storyline and the chemistry/sexual tension between Sophie and Kayla is palpable. It was definitely a love story that grabbed my heart.

The only thing I would say is that if there is a Part 2 please develop the main characters a little more, especially Sophie. It would be easier to connect with her and understand her thoughts and feelings if we know more about her and her backstory.

All in all an amazing story and I'm looking forward to reading more of your future works!

There were times when I wondered if the author had read this back or just dictated the tale at speed, ignoring little things like punctuation. Commas are there to help the flow, and without them it sounds, in my mind, like words being rapidly spewed out; maybe they were being rationed in this story?

I did like the storyline, it felt believable and less like a male fantasy, like some lesbian stories, but the ending felt rushed, sort of almost an afterthought. It didn't feel like it did the characters justice.

Please don't do a part 2; the story is complete as it stands. She's got the girl - how do you build another story when the plot is already given away?

Your stories are fantastic and so enjoy the romance I tried to hit a 5 rating but my tablet is so small I hit 1, sorry

I keep getting back here, this story keeps me on my toes every time, even though I know the ending. Thank you for this masterpiece. The best part is that tension. Just - wow!

Loved it. My second favourite in bodyguard stories.

It's amazing, sweet and cute fluff. Loved how the group supports them and has their back.

Are you in Wattpad? It's worth all the views and vote it can get.

💖💖💖💖💖 ....... 5 hearts oh sorry stars ........ Great ....... Just a great love romance written by a talented lady ........ Thank you

Excellent!

This is literally the only story which have almost no sex but still so lovely.

A truly beautiful love story. I loved reading this. Well written and engaging

This did not end the way I expected. Very sweet.

A work of art. Thanks.

Been such a long time since I read this had forgotten some of the details, but still riveting...

one of two best bodyguard stories...and other in a galaxy far far away....

That's one fucked up girl !!

I loved the story. Big sucker for romance and angst-releasing endings. BUT.... This story should have an epilogue. What did Kayla do in Sophie's absence? Did she go back to her promiscuous ways? Did she continue to abuse alcohol? Did she mature and clean up her ways? I'm rounding my rating up to a 5😘. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely story

Great story. The end was short though. I would have liked Kayla to give Soph more of a hard time about winning her back.

I’ve reread this probably 5 or 6 times and this is one of those stories that would be great

Hearing it from Kayla’s point of view. How she fell for or fought not to fall for her body guard.

Thanks for the great read though…..