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AprilSmithSucksAprilSmithSucksalmost 10 years ago
This is NOT "Erotic Couplings".

Pretty good...but you put it in the wrong category. We don't go to "Erotic Couplings" to read stories about heroes fighting bad-guys.

I suggest you relocate this story to "Novels and Novellas". That's where this kind of drama/action belongs.

~William (April Smith Sucks)

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