All Comments on 'The Bonding Chronicles Ch. 05'

Your story is unusual and my interest in it continues to build. I can't wait to see where this is going. Thanks, for the effort!

This story started great and keeps getting better with each chapter. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

Fantastic story; more, please!

Please continue!

Really happy I stumbled upon this series. Great story unfolding at a perfect pace...can't wait for more. Looking forward to what Karen will reveal, and more so for Andrew's origin. Why is he so small, at least in relation to his parents? Are his powers genetic or a result of his parents' experiments? Love the fantasy elements. Keep it coming...

good work keep it up

tantric wizardry

lol

Did you know you can see the Quinault school on Google Earth? And downtown Hoquiam?

how you got Will to back off Andrew, not to mention how Andrew can now command Sara to back off mentally. Somehow Andrew is a wizard and his parents aren't involved? That's one jump I can't see but I'll let it ride. 5

This is really not, how to deal with mobbing and violence. This sounds more like a masochism kink than anything else. It's a pity, because it destroys an otherwise great tale for me.