All Comments on 'The Bonding Ritual Ch. 01-05'

Nice

I like it don't stop

Wow amazing start I'm really hoping aurora manages to come back, I'm seeing hints that she might fingers crossed. Can't wait till next installment

great opening!

Excellent Start.

Good start to what appears to likely a great story.

Only don’t stop part way through and leave readers/followers of the story hanging

Chrs

Very interesting. I’m always a bit hesitant about reading possible mind control types of stories but it seems like this one will be done respectfully if it comes to that. I’m looking forward to more chapters.

Very good start. Liking it so far and interested in seeing the direction it goes!

Excellent start to the story. Little dry in some areas but overall very intriguing story. Can’t wait for the next chapters to be posted. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for reading and all the positive feedback. I'll be posting the next set of chapters this week. Just proofreading them now.

@Cuthcavs55 While there will be some aspects of mind control, this story will involve moral implications of such power along with the importance of freedom of choice. I hope you enjoy where it goes.

Excellent story. Thanks.

Amazing story. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes!

AI and multivariate travelers? I hope they are related. I hope this doesn't become a free for all where angels and demons come and clowns from outer space land. Some stories get out of hand because of too many ingredients. I like it so far.

@Blacksword404 if the story is going in the direction I think it is the AI will be critical to fixing the issues discovered in the other multiverse universes.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next chapters

I'd have rated this higher, but I despise weak male protagonists. I know the author is pretending James has moral integrity but 2 points of IQ disprove that idea. James is ignoring both her safety and her core agency. And he's doing so for his own pathetic little feelings. No real man would behave in such a way. I don't care if it's a common plot tool, it reflects poorly on his character that he won't put his emotions aside to keep her safe.

Great start, interesting premise. Starting the singularity helps create a unique character and a reason for his specialness, neat concept.