by lustfulcreations
Good chapter. Nice story building. Wish it was a little longer and more story in one chapter but doing a chapter a week I know is difficult to do. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.
Pretty good story.
Still when will the next chapter come out???
It's just starting to get real interesting - and then it stops.
Working on the next set of chapters. Trying to balance length of submissions and time between posts.