All Comments on 'The Boner Girl'

Pornobonic

Normally it doesn't work very well to write erotica as a 'porn script,' but this succeeds. A little over-the-top, but not excessively. Some clever phrasings:

'His tongue stumbled on a nipple'

Well done.

Excellent story. Very hot and well-written.

I'm glad she got the chance to show what a good performer she could be.

5-stars.