All Comments on 'The Bonobo Girls Pt. 01'

You started a good thing there, easy to read, credible plof, promising excitement. Where is chapter 2? Bring it on....

I found myself actually enjoying this 'setup'. Just keep them hydrated since the desert is so unforgiving. Can't wait to see how each of them live out their fantasies.

and they solve their problems with sex!!

If only we could. Great grabber, and you grabbed me. Run with this one and let your mind roam free. Lets see where this goes.

Even if it goes nowhere, thanks for the mind flash.

So interesting how you incorporate the apes into their team name. I actually didn't know about Bonobo monkies, so I was intrigued. There were a couple of minor errors, but with an editor, that can easily be fixed. The same goes for me. I am excited to keep reading!

Just found this story... It isn't *bad,* per se, but if you're going to use something like this as a background, you really ought to know what you're talking about. It feels like you just took your ideas about what a rave is like and scaled them up to fit your particular kinks. That's fine, but it's not Burning Man.