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DomJ69 over 4 years ago

No Sexual Tension

For a story to be erotic there needs to be some conflict that excites the mind or it has to be very sexual. Unfortunately, this had neither and I fail to see why this is in 'Incest/Taboo'.

Sorry for being negative, but I hope my comment makes you think more when writing your next submission.

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