All Comments on 'The Book of Lust 01'

...I can't wait for the next chapter, and any to follow. Keep up the good work.

I like the premise. Looking forward to more chapters

I really liked the story and I hope there will be even more "action" with the Goddess in the chapters to come.

Do go on, give the main char some challenges. Don't make things to easy, like "here check out the book" and bam they are his. :)

Good start, though I would have preferred a more sequential story line.

Definitely has lots of potential for a big busted harem adventure.

And I’m looking forward to where this is going. Good to have you back.

I shall enjoy this.Let us see where this goes.

Thank you.

That was a very good story .Hope you do more with it .Thank You for the good read .

Can’t wait to see where this goes!

I quite liked it. Please continue, I believe this will be very good.

It is a good start to a promising story line.

I look forward to seeing more!

Very well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.

This story is a work of art and has unlimited potential I can’t wait to see what’s to come

As always, love the way you write, keep going.

great start, can't wait to read more

I look forward to reading more!

this story felt very fresh while being in a well explored genre. i honestly hope that you keep writing this series, i feel like it is full of much potential. also i found the idea that its a goddess controlling a man, who can control mortal women to be quite intriguing and rather erotic to thing about.

Please send us another soon. Very good, well written. Subject could take many chapters to explore.

This was a great start and I hope there will be more chapters added soon.

You have once again started a story that keeps me on the edge of my seat and dying for the next chapter. Thank you.

Good start please continue

A wonderful beginning to this story! Well written and well placed! I’m looking forward to reading more of this story! Thank you!

The protagonist can't be a very good egyptologist if he thinks "Al-Qahirah" is ancient Egyptian when it's obviously Arabic.

Nitpick, obviously -- nice start for the new story

Excellent!

I LOVE YOUR STORIES -- THE DETAIL AND FLOW OF THE STORY IS ENOUGH TO HOOK ME IN AND KEEP ME THERE AS MORE CHAPTERS ARE ADDED! LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING WHERE THIS STORY GOES

Very nice keep it going :$

This was great-several wonderful touches that make it better than the average Egyptian Goddess awakens story!

Excellent in thought and execution. More, please!!

Great story. Please keep it going.

i would love to see a continuance of this story, along with some mention of the other gods and lore behind them.

I demand more. This is a unique spin. Give it a go!

Bloody good start to a story, but to clarify on the nitpick, on a preliminary search according to Wiki it was Arabic and also the name of Cairo.

But this always amazes me, a story is a story, unless it is written as non-fiction so why in hell does it have to correspond to anything we know, down as far as if Joe Boggs has a shop in outer Mongolia or not. And yes that's an example.

Let the story unfold as it's written, and then decide yea or nay.

Thanks JC I look forward to the next chapter.

Please continue. Great harem stories are hard to find, especially ones where the guy is good to his girls

Your writing is fine, if cliched, but the details are ridiculous. Real archaeologists are nothing like Indiana Jones. Any two-person team of foreigners who are alone in an undisturbed Egyptian tomb without being accompanied by native Egyptians are probably breaking Egyptian law and would be arrested and have any "finds" confiscated instead of gaining fame or fortune. Actual Egyptian tombs were "protected" by obstacles, decoys, and inscribed curses, never mechanical traps. Secret doors in such tombs did not have mechanical catches of any kind,, and if they did, such mechanisms would be completely inoperable by now. Egyptian beds had reed blankets, not "sheets." Leatherbound books weren't invented until the first century CE, and written Egyptian was in hieratic script rather than hieroglyphs anyway.

Sorry, I don't usually go off on what's supposed to be "light reading" like this, but this story really struck me the wrong way.

I love this story so far. Please continue this story line.

I think the point was that he wasn’t like Indiana Jones, but he admired the character and wanted to be like Dr. Jones. I liked the detail and hope you continue.

Like Khaled would say it.... "Another one...."

it definitely held my interest and left me curious for the continuation. Please don't make us wait too long. 5 stars!

You have an exciting and lusty story to tell. Please continue to tell it!

"THIS WAS GREAT!!!

So... “the ancient gears and levers moved in RUSTY sockets”.

I don’t think so. If the sockets were ancient and rusty then nothing would move in them. However rust can only form on iron as rust is exactly iron oxide. So what I hear you say....

Egypt at the time of Pharos was well and truly in the Bronze Age. Bronze knives, bronze swords and everything bronze.

So if your going to write a story that’s set up with technical stuff then get it the fuck correct. We are not all as dumb as you.

To see a lot more of this series, outstanding work.

Great story with LOTS of potential. I hope you continue this story.

Really enjoying your work and looking forward to the next episodes!

This ended to soon would like to know what the bitch partner But not a bad start.

Thanks for your continuous good work.

Oh this must be continued. So many fun possibilities await~

You must continue!!

This chapter was well thought out, written, and presented. Keep up the good work.

As a opening for a series it sets an interesting theme. That we could find a Kedesh.

Love this kind of thing

Good job so far

his name is Creamer, other than that nice beginning

Incomplete so don’t bother. In the last submitted chapter the author says he just gives up on a story when he gets a bit bored.

Don't listen to the naysayers. You have transported us to another place where artistic license is valid. An intriguing start that has follow up chapters written all over it. In view of the current state of our world, viruses, wars, climate change etc ,as we head towards extinction , this is a fantastical breath of fresh air. I look forward to your imagination at its best.

Loving this so far!

Wonderful set up, an adventure with a goddess shows a lot of thought. More please!

Excellent story but then why wouldn’t it be considering I have loved every story of yours I have read. I can’t wait to get to binge reading more of your stuff. Thanks for posting all your hard and time consuming work.

J.D.

Fantastic idea. Shows a lot of promise.

Another unfinished series

damn good wish it was the first chapter of a full lenght novel

Ah yes all the adventure of ' Indiana Jones and the sensuality of 'Behind the Green Door'. Definitely look forward to reading the rest of your story. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's (goddess'?) imagination and creative abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Yeah, not a bad start actually.

Good start! Keep it up :)

That was one of the most unusual stories I have read. Not so much the story itself which was excellent but the way it seemed to plod along and then all of a sudden it completely hooked me. That was the first time I have had such an experience although I found it surprising and can’t wait to get further into the chapters.

Very good start to a fantasy adventure. Look forward to the journey.

Intriguing! Looking forward to reading more.

I decided to read this story because it shares a title with an adult {ahem} game on the F95Zone adult game site.

The game is nothing like this story, except that it features a "Book of Lust" - though that one gives the "hero" magical powers and control of a succubus...

The site is at F95zone[dot]to, and you can use the "Search" function to search for the game, if interested.

Thankyou for your effort putting this tale together looking forward to the next episode

Continue please.

I've enjoyed how you give a brief present moment view to engage the reader before going back and going through all the build up.

Really nice built up to and of the story. Good grammar (at least for me as not native to english) so it is easy to read.

Great beginning. I am looking forward to more.

I never want it to stop.

Terriffic beginning!