by Agnol
WOW you really outdid yourself !! please continue or do a Part2 with like what has happened a year later.
A perfectly fun and sexy story, but it seems a bit arbitrary to just stick three short stories together like this. Why not have some sort of framing device that linked them together in some way?
Still, it was a good enough read and I happily walked myself off to it, so you can't say better than that, really.