All Comments on 'The Bookstore'

Good work. Excellent debut.

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Such a sweet daughter

Good story, very dirty and grimes but wicked hot!

I’m not a big fan of licking guy’s asses, and while intrigued by glory holes, the risk of disease is a mojitos concern. However, those are “me” issues and the taboo of both of these things only made me tingle more while reading.

Just the thought of a father exposing his daughter to this underbelly of society, and her eagerly and willingly going along with it gets my panties damp.

Well done! I’m just sorry it ended before the rest of her holes got used by the rest of the men in the shop. I hope the woman in black gets involved too in the next chapter.

Totally degenerate story, terrible things done to the poor girl...Loved it! What this site needs, more sex, less moralizing. 5*s.

Wonder how Daddy would like to be the submissive in that bookstore? What's fair for the goose is fair for the gander.

looking forward to

Well Damn !

Absolutely wonderful, Shiloh! I love your dirty mind!

-- Shawna

Thanks for all the feedback, everyone! If you enjoyed this read, make sure you check out chapter 2 and as always, feedback is welcome :)

I’m about to cum too! Man this was good