All Comments on 'The Bookstore Ch. 01'

You hit alot of good points in this story. I was hooked about half way thru. I hope you continue this story line. There are many possibilities. I love book store stories, bi, gay and women. I would like to see Paul go after more women, and maybe a glory hole scene in the video section. How about an all out orgy in the store?

Thanks

Divermuff

This is a great story and I can't wait for the next installment. I'm amazed that there haven't been more comments.