All Comments on 'The Bookstore Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

The questioning anon is back......

I found the next level of explaination concerning the appeal of humiliation. Jack Rinella (gay leatherman)-leatherviews.com...in the kinky info section (archives of his columns). If you search the word humiliation you'll get several columns on the subject. So far, they are the best, most understandable, explainations I've found.

It is still personally painful, so I don't think I can read any more of this story. However, I think you are a good writer, and I will try future stories of yours.

Again, thank you for your indulgence...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
oohhh

I enjoyed that chapter as much as the first. As I said for chapter 3 I guess its the humiliation part that I dont like but the rest definately is exciting. Great read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Simply Superb!

This 4-parter was the most intensively erotic sub training tale that I've read either here or elsewhere over recent times. Now that you've left the door open at the end of Chapter 4, take her (and we readers) farther along the road - please!!!

alexis17alexis17almost 11 years ago
submission

This has to be one of the better d/s stories I've read. With that being said, how does one go about explaining to their spouse that they need to be made to submit fully and not top from the bottom?

aisielynnaisielynnabout 10 years ago

Wow! *smiles, hazels sparkling* He reads her like a book. Loving this story and looking forward to reading the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

where did he fuck her in her ass or pussy

or was his thumb fucking her ass and his cock in her pussy

if he fucked her ass then she should bleed he didnt use anal lube at all

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