All Comments on 'The Boss'

by KLC1977

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hindsight2020hindsight2020over 1 year ago

XL bottom and XXL top.??!

That draws an unpleasant image in the mind of a reader.

Overweight apple shape with overhanging belly fat.

???

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Premise with potential.

But all the typos and grammar errors are much too distracting.

And the sex, when it happens, os much too abrupt and automatic.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Waiting for part 2

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