All Comments on 'The Bowyer's Tale'

Well it took me five months (and five major drafts) after my September forecast of a couple of days until this sequel was ready, but it's finally a story I'm happy with and one I hope will please fans of The Groom's Tale and new readers alike.

Since this is only my second attempt at writing erotic fiction, I'd like to know what people thought about these stories and which aspects of them were good and which could be improved. I'd also be curious about reader theories regarding the various mysteries surrounding the characters, clues, and plot.